The Powder Toy

Enterprise-D by RoadRipper

RoadRipper
RoadRipper
13 / 2
13th Aug 2011
6th Sep 2011
V1.2 - added transporter
notjustpixelart

Comments

  • RoadRipper
    RoadRipper     1st Sep 2011
    @shrO_Om96 - thanks dude, hope you found the surprise in the save too. Best wishes, DadRipper
  • shrO_Om96
    shrO_Om96     31st Aug 2011
    i hardcore love star trek! i love your borg save too, that episode was awsome
  • RoadRipper
    RoadRipper     19th Aug 2011
    real attention to detail @awhiteguy - clearly a true trek fan! - I may make some other saves soon - best wishes.
  • AWhiteGuy
    AWhiteGuy     19th Aug 2011
    I have given feedback though you probably cannot see it unless you are in the browser and not on tpt
  • AWhiteGuy
    AWhiteGuy     19th Aug 2011
    You asked me for feedback on this save, this is my feedback. The map of the ship is a good idea but that would probably do better in more detail and a different publication; the smaller ship would be better as just a straight on picture like it is coming toward you or just a starboard view like the bigger one; there is no need for two of the same ship in the same publication, get rid of the smaller ship, fill in the bigger ship, decorate it in more detail than the smaller ship; the warp nacelles should be glowing wheather warp is engaged or not, simulate going to warp by either showing passing stars or making the nacelles glow brighter or some other creative way; it looks like you tried to make the bigger ship simulate impulse engines, impulse engines are blocked from view by the nacelles; the deflector dish is outlined in blue; the "lobe" on the bottom of the ship should end closer to the back; the transporter is a good idea but the planet the transporter puts the person on is a bit contrary to the ship goind at warp unless the planet were to move away when warp is engaged. Good luck with your improvements.
  • RoadRipper
    RoadRipper     19th Aug 2011
    @12bcrawford - pixel artist pls
  • 12bcrawford
    12bcrawford     18th Aug 2011
    ok what does he want to be?
  • RoadRipper
    RoadRipper     18th Aug 2011
    This save (apart from the counter) is by DadRipper - but RoadRipper would be pleased to join your club. Regards, DadRipper
  • 12bcrawford
    12bcrawford     18th Aug 2011
    hey roadripper do u want to join the pyromaniac club?
  • RoadRipper
    RoadRipper     15th Aug 2011
    spark the coloured buttons to work it